Core Narrative 7

TITLE: Hacking the Gods

CORRESPONDING MACRO-STORY BEAT: Main Event Showdown

SHORT STORY SYNOPSIS/LOGLINE THAT INCLUDES A CLEAR BEGINNING, MIDDLE AND END:

Hannah’s father told her that he would be right back and not to leave the house. He was just going to take her mother to the hospital because he needed fresh supplies and use of their equipment. That was 6 months ago. She was left with her younger brother Ethan.

While gathering food one day, she runs into Diego Goya who has been traveling the earth with his family, teaching people how to hack the Bose. They invite her and her brother to join them and learn the ways of the non-techers. Hannah successfully learns how to hack the Bose and now wants nothing more than to help. Hannah goes on missions with Diego and crew, however Ethan grows resentful of Hannah’s skills and her not spending time with him. She should be focusing on finding the family after all. Hannah tries to be in both worlds, but realizes that she should be more supportive of her brother who might be the only family she has left. Diego promises her that they will continue the fight while she cares for her brother.

With Hannah’s patient help, Ethan soon learns hacking skills as well, and wants to go with her to finish the mission against the gods. The world wide hacking collaboration soon has enough free humans to weaken the gods and the final connections are broken. The Bose are rounded up and dumped in junkyards. With humanity free many lost love ones are reunited including Hannah, Ethan and their parents, who had been trapped by a Bose shortly after leaving her over a year ago.

GENRE: Family

PROTAGONIST: Hannah Milton, a 14 year old girl who is forced to be a parent to her brother and wants freedom.

ANTAGONIST: Gods - Hannah is actively fighting against them.

Ethan Milton - 11 year old, brother of Hanna. Holding Hannah back from being a kid.

MAIN SUPPORTING CHARACTERS W/ DESCRIPTIONS: Diego Goya, Ethan Milton

PRIMARY LOCATIONS WITH DESCRIPTIONS: Denver, Colorado

ADDITIVE COMPREHENSION: This is where you find out that the humans have freed themselves.

MEDIUM: Live Action Feature Film

WHY IT WORKS IN THIS MEDIUM: The final beat in the macro story needs to be a big visual representation of the world. With a big budget like this, the audience needs to see the world entierly fleshed out.

PLATFORM: Movie Theaters

WHY IT WORKS IN THIS PLATFORM: The wider a release we can get the better. After so long following the story, the conclusion for the audience should be on the big screen.